Alan Wake (
furrows) wrote in
asgardeventide2012-03-11 04:22 am
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001 ✎ First Manuscript ✎ Video/Action
--no, this is wrong, this is all wrong- I can't be here, it's not-- I can't!
[Afternoon, Asgard. There may just be a video clicking on now, showing a man who's partially wounded with bandages on his forehead, standing in the middle of the city and feverishly flipping through pages he has in his hand. He looks worn, tire, almost as if he's seen a ghost standing right beside him. His voice is panicked, and he's talking to himself a mile a minute.]
Not in the manuscript, I'm not... I'm not supposed to be here- what is this?! I have to get back to Bright Falls! I can't be here, don't they understand? Alice-
[He starts shouting, terrified of what's gone wrong.]
Alice? ALICE!! Where are you??
[And then he goes back to panicking at a normal tone, sounding almost hysterical.]
Oh god, oh god. This isn't Bright Falls. I have to get back! [He turns to the citizens walking by, a huge sea of gray, and begs with them.] Please, I know you need help right now, but I have to go back! I'll do whatever you want afterwards, I promise! Please, just please, send me back! Alice, I have to save her! PLEASE!!
[The people look at him, but say nothing, and continue on. Alan sinks to his knees, looking rather hopeless and dejected as it's slowly dawning on him that no one cares. One of the residents accidentally bumps into the papers in his hand, and they scatter, leaving the man to himself to pick up the pieces in a massive crowd.
Someone help the poor guy out? He's close to a mental breakdown. )8]
[Afternoon, Asgard. There may just be a video clicking on now, showing a man who's partially wounded with bandages on his forehead, standing in the middle of the city and feverishly flipping through pages he has in his hand. He looks worn, tire, almost as if he's seen a ghost standing right beside him. His voice is panicked, and he's talking to himself a mile a minute.]
Not in the manuscript, I'm not... I'm not supposed to be here- what is this?! I have to get back to Bright Falls! I can't be here, don't they understand? Alice-
[He starts shouting, terrified of what's gone wrong.]
Alice? ALICE!! Where are you??
[And then he goes back to panicking at a normal tone, sounding almost hysterical.]
Oh god, oh god. This isn't Bright Falls. I have to get back! [He turns to the citizens walking by, a huge sea of gray, and begs with them.] Please, I know you need help right now, but I have to go back! I'll do whatever you want afterwards, I promise! Please, just please, send me back! Alice, I have to save her! PLEASE!!
[The people look at him, but say nothing, and continue on. Alan sinks to his knees, looking rather hopeless and dejected as it's slowly dawning on him that no one cares. One of the residents accidentally bumps into the papers in his hand, and they scatter, leaving the man to himself to pick up the pieces in a massive crowd.
Someone help the poor guy out? He's close to a mental breakdown. )8]

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[It's really hard to ignore your name being screamed like that. Not the Alice you're certainly looking for, but it's enough to have Alice tentatively approach, bending down to his level, and pick up a piece of paper.]
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Sorry Alice, it's nothing meant to offend you, he's just terribly paranoid.]
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I heard my name... I'm sorry I'm not the Alice you're looking for.
[With a stoic expression and keeping a distance, Alice will remain nothing but neutral, not even in the least attempting to touch him. She's been in this position many times, she's always hated someone trying to calm her down by means of touching.]
Here. Some of your papers.
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You're named Alice?
[It's not as if that's uncommon to him- he's just so used to shouting her name and no one answering.
Gently, he takes the manuscript from her hands and examines it, sighing a little as he counts all the pages are in place. His eyes flicker back to the girl, and for a second he pauses.]
...Thank you.
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Yes, sir, my name is Alice Liddell.
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action because you obviously need a god figure, alan
Calm down. It's alright.
[Jacob knows that he no longer has his powers anymore, so he can't just influence the poor man's mood through his touch anymore. But he can still be a calming presence for a man who has obviously suffered too much before he came here.]
I'm sorry this happened to you. But there's nothing to be done. You can't go back.
action ahahahaha oh god this will turn out beautiful a+
But what he is sure about is how he reacts. The second Jacob tries to calm him, Alan jumps. A look of pure terror crosses his face, eyes whirling with the rest of his body, trying to see this threat that's caught him by the shoulder, and possibly retaliate-
And then it hits him. He doesn't have a gun, or a flashlight. What if it's a Taken? Or even the Darkness? How is he going to defend himself??
Which shortly translates into giving poor Jacob a "deer in the headlights" look, the writer completely and utterly panicked at this newcomer, and this whole situation. He tries to move and back away, unsure of his surroundings, and just wanting to go home.]
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[He then holds up his hands as if in apology for having scared him, slowly approaching him again.]
It's alright. I mean no harm. I'm like you. I've also been taken here.
[And a slight smile.]
You're in no immediate danger, don't worry.
action ...LIGHT, YOU SAY? 8D! /FROLICS
I... I need to go back. I need to save my wife.
[At the mentioning of danger, however, he shakes his head.]
I don't know if being here is going to stop it.
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Take deep breaths, sir. Try to calm yourself -- I'll be there as soon as I can.
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I can't-- no no no, I can't be here, it'll find me and make this worse, Alice... Alice!
[Whoop, there he goes shouting again and looking frantic. Better hurry, Watson.]
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[action] LMAO THIRD TIME IS THE CHARM I NEED AN EDIT BUTTON
[action] I know! My kingdom for a paid account, seriously.
[action] Sob I think we all need one
[action] Indeed! Sorry for the late response, btw!
[action] no big! I am le slow tagger myself :|b
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If this Alice of yours is around she will reply, but unfortunately you are not home and nor is anyone else here. So in that, you are not alone.
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[He's sounding panicked, but at least he's calmed down a little, hearing that.]
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Fretting will do you no good here, sadly. Allow me to be blunt and tell you that no one has seemed to find a way home and be able to speak of it to others. So at this moment, the danger she might have been in is behind you.
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My wife, she's been kidnapped and is being held by ransom. It won't harm her as long as I'm still alive.
[He shudders audibly through the bracelet, breathing in and out.]
But I don't know how it'll react if I'm not there anymore. What it will do to her, or to anyone else.
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Are you going to be all right?
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[Now that people have talked to him a bit, he is considerably less panicked, but no less discouraged from before. His eyes are downcast and he gives a look of defeat towards Kadar, eyes swimming in a tornado of emotions.]
I'm... I don't know. I need to get back- but I can't. They said I can't. I have to save her though.
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They told me I can't. That going home is impossible. My wife is kidnapped, and I can't go back home to make things right.
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May I ask where you are? I still have yet to really learn how to get around this place myself, but you seem like you need help.
[ There's an underlying robotic tone in her voice, although she may appear human, you can tell by the sound of her voice that she's just short of that. She could definitely pass for one if she didn't speak or sing, though.
And well .. She's not really sure how to help, after all -- all she knows is how to sing. But she could definitely try to at least help him with finding this .. Alice? That he seems to be looking for! ]
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I think... I think the woman who- who greeted me. She said I was supposed to go to Odin. But I'm not far from where she was. It... looks like a castle.
[Alan if you had been paying attention you'd know you were by the palace. :|]
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I'll see if I can find my way there. Please try to stay calm in the meantime, okay? You won't find "Alice", was it? If you remain in such a frenzied state.
It's going to be okay.
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But he blinks, and nods, trying to calm down. Trying to say something right now is just really discouragig.]
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